tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post3033055934500009488..comments2014-11-25T15:40:54.856+01:00Comments on Synecdochic Stuff: Monday Memo to Forests Department ChiefAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13823109424519657612noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-90585760537847664722009-08-31T06:29:21.141+02:002009-08-31T06:29:21.141+02:00Thank you all! This was fun to write, of course. ...Thank you all! This was fun to write, of course. It always is when the subject matter takes the pencil out of the writer's hand and runs off in its own direction.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13823109424519657612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-57546946914233716612009-08-31T03:11:48.232+02:002009-08-31T03:11:48.232+02:00You do wonder just what is to be done about those ...You do wonder just what is to be done about those birds.<br />Just the right mix of whimsy and exasperationAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-80842925420318031352009-08-31T01:20:40.420+02:002009-08-31T01:20:40.420+02:00Love it! My favourite from this prompt by far.Love it! My favourite from this prompt by far.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-21956896645527263032009-08-30T01:34:11.079+02:002009-08-30T01:34:11.079+02:00from Therese B. on RWP -- The outrageousness of t...from Therese B. on RWP -- The outrageousness of the Herculean "labors" builds line-by-line, and the ending is priceless. I love the casual "you know" and the "I suppose." Great job, and so different from your poem of last week!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-49493533978208749752009-08-30T00:53:06.165+02:002009-08-30T00:53:06.165+02:00indeed a great remedy...nice oneindeed a great remedy...nice oneWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-65551600837332691942009-08-29T19:06:30.966+02:002009-08-29T19:06:30.966+02:00Well-crafted and your tone is spot on. I enjoyed t...Well-crafted and your tone is spot on. I enjoyed this very much.Nathanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11552467037640904091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-19824722915885052009-08-29T09:48:25.777+02:002009-08-29T09:48:25.777+02:00I loved it too.You've given me a dose of the S...I loved it too.You've given me a dose of the Sunday night blues and I'm self employed now.Well done Wanda.rallentandanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-3187978102494865392009-08-29T04:03:17.548+02:002009-08-29T04:03:17.548+02:00It feels like the orders for a colony of forest gn...It feels like the orders for a colony of forest gnomes. I loved it :).udernationhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06852762979025214594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-10196652157170281202009-08-28T23:10:15.850+02:002009-08-28T23:10:15.850+02:00Lovely spoof of bosses zany expectations that ever...Lovely spoof of bosses zany expectations that every employed person faces.<br /><br /><i>turn flower faces two degrees-<br />you can leave the dew alone,</i><br /><br />Wonderful!Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-1166278384618363262009-08-28T21:40:53.158+02:002009-08-28T21:40:53.158+02:00wanda i found some humor in the subject matter con...wanda i found some humor in the subject matter connecting to the headline. an unexpected take featuring some wonderful technical language: "a fraction north". enjoyed this afternoon. -lawrenceLawrence Gladeviewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10074490753640053690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-67178871810759191542009-08-28T19:52:52.582+02:002009-08-28T19:52:52.582+02:00Thanks, Derrick - extraordinarily kind of you to f...Thanks, Derrick - extraordinarily kind of you to find something good to say - but I scrapped that poem. It wasn't ready yet. I have another one posted now - take a look.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13823109424519657612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-65622002663529803962009-08-28T16:36:30.636+02:002009-08-28T16:36:30.636+02:00Hi Wanda,
"And the heart pain?
Lessens with ...Hi Wanda,<br /><br />"And the heart pain?<br />Lessens with each laughing breath"<br /><br />Sounds like a good remedy!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.com