tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post1744832404872933201..comments2014-11-25T15:40:54.856+01:00Comments on Synecdochic Stuff: napowrimo # 17Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13823109424519657612noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-10571089632089467072010-04-18T04:46:01.826+02:002010-04-18T04:46:01.826+02:00Some great imagery. This being distilled from a l...Some great imagery. This being distilled from a longer piece provides us with the sweet liquor at the end of the process.troysworktablehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10134124055869148540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-88128563944388948472010-04-18T01:46:30.381+02:002010-04-18T01:46:30.381+02:00This is a great earth poem. It's consoling to ...This is a great earth poem. It's consoling to understand and trust in the natural order of things. I really like the whole short poem. And I'm especially drawn to the lines "our dead regenerate into fertile soil."Shari Smothershttp://slstellingstories.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-29087512021253102252010-04-18T01:04:48.073+02:002010-04-18T01:04:48.073+02:00Why did this bring a smile to my face?
Probably be...Why did this bring a smile to my face?<br />Probably because it is so Wanda...so matter of fact...Love your style!rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-54472770930950906132010-04-18T00:29:42.801+02:002010-04-18T00:29:42.801+02:00Every line has something to say. Overall it remind...Every line has something to say. Overall it reminds us that ths life, and death, we all take so seriously, is after all, just a process.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-72803646635942616402010-04-18T00:07:08.562+02:002010-04-18T00:07:08.562+02:00i had to laugh at yr comments there w/ya!!!... i l...i had to laugh at yr comments there w/ya!!!... i like the idea of dying death and regeneration you have portrayed.. it seems so natural as it should be... <a href="http://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/04/17/sirocco/" rel="nofollow">sirocco</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-37318083215958571602010-04-17T23:05:50.356+02:002010-04-17T23:05:50.356+02:00Thanks, Sheila. It was 4x longer, but I found as ...Thanks, Sheila. It was 4x longer, but I found as I cut nothing was lost but blah, blah, you know. A lesson I needed to learn.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13823109424519657612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2422912453738655217.post-14279340080530331012010-04-17T22:53:24.180+02:002010-04-17T22:53:24.180+02:00Very nice. If this is your long poem cut to the qu...Very nice. If this is your long poem cut to the quick you cut it most beautifully.Sheila Deethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13465615546936319164noreply@blogger.com